tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post5415792889851664436..comments2023-12-31T16:30:56.708+00:00Comments on Lily Childs' Feardom: New Flash - RESCUE MISSION - and a Writing Group RecommendationLily Childshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15861288507716873813noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-46944758085706383382012-03-06T23:22:31.379+00:002012-03-06T23:22:31.379+00:00That is excellent, Lily. You've really refine...That is excellent, Lily. You've really refined your writing, keeping in only what's necessary, only what rocks.EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-49335105121203832502012-03-06T22:29:57.304+00:002012-03-06T22:29:57.304+00:00Lily, I thought it was a great story when I first ...Lily, I thought it was a great story when I first read it on Talkback - but when I read it again here, I knew it was a great story!<br /><br />I'm in the middle of moving house (just done the packing bit) and will be without my umbilical to the world until mid-March (the Ides, actually), but I'll get back just as soon as I can. <br />Gonna miss these guys.<br />KimKimhttp://scratchypen.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-60492283392672418142012-03-06T19:06:45.599+00:002012-03-06T19:06:45.599+00:00Yay Sandra - I'll see you there! I'm LilyC...Yay Sandra - I'll see you there! I'm LilyC, funnily enough. Thanks for your comments on <em>Rescue Mission</em> too.<br /><br />John, melodrama works for me. Thank you for enjoying it ;-)Lily Childshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15861288507716873813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-87944895068687616532012-03-06T14:21:51.261+00:002012-03-06T14:21:51.261+00:00Lily, I love it. Fragments and splinters of The En...Lily, I love it. Fragments and splinters of The End. It's good that the question remains unanswered; in the end, all is fractured, all is tragic.<br /><br />Or is that just a tad melodramatic? ;)<br /><br />Wonderfully weighed and balanced piece. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-38977012894968186062012-03-06T11:35:24.008+00:002012-03-06T11:35:24.008+00:00I've been back and forth to Talkback several t...I've been back and forth to Talkback several times and finally applied - TIME!!! if only I had more.<br />The laconic opening line of 'Rescue Mission' is irresistible and the spacing/pacing effective indeed.Sandra Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11788472031698175632noreply@blogger.com