tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post4796807029592376508..comments2023-12-31T16:30:56.708+00:00Comments on Lily Childs' Feardom: Enter the live labyrinth of Asuqi - February Femme Fatale.Lily Childshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15861288507716873813noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-48149925717281453852011-02-21T20:50:36.524+00:002011-02-21T20:50:36.524+00:00This is so well written Asuqi. Very impressive.
Th...This is so well written Asuqi. Very impressive.<br />The story is heart breaking and horrific but sadly, as someone else mentioned, so true. <br />The end was interesting and I like how you portrayed the cyclic nature of abuse through her smile being like his.<br />You handled a difficult subject very well.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18014683585191165226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-45207149327823844662011-02-20T23:02:18.854+00:002011-02-20T23:02:18.854+00:00This is beautifully written, with the right balanc...This is beautifully written, with the right balance of sadness and darkness and tragedy, and neatly captures the dark side of human nature.AllWriteFictionAdvicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03381125356850555606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-77602183296307545772011-02-20T16:24:10.873+00:002011-02-20T16:24:10.873+00:00There is a seed of evil implanted with abuse. Depe...There is a seed of evil implanted with abuse. Depending on the soil of the child's heart, depending on the weather and the one who sows and cares for that seed of evil, it grows into the heart to the point where uprooting it will kill the child. Options are limited. The story is brilliantly told and sadly, so true. There are choices, but to the victim, they are impossible to see. Your story reminded me of one of my favorite dark music videos called Labyrinth by Oomph. <br />http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y3lndvRhS_MJodi MacArthurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13373591664178281529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-51556603896228692502011-02-20T13:10:57.539+00:002011-02-20T13:10:57.539+00:00Chilling, heartbreaking, and exquisitely written. ...Chilling, heartbreaking, and exquisitely written. I loved this line - "I only dance abstract pieces."Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-4799958087576774072011-02-19T10:46:05.794+00:002011-02-19T10:46:05.794+00:00Lily, you stun me! I´m going to go about pretendin...Lily, you stun me! I´m going to go about pretending I´m Sylvia Plath all day long =)<br /><br />Thank you everyone for your lovely comments! And Lou, gee...Thanks...asuqihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05478950013985706858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-65741491520516527942011-02-18T16:38:46.187+00:002011-02-18T16:38:46.187+00:00A gorgeous write- loved the voice and theme of thi...A gorgeous write- loved the voice and theme of this piece, and a chilling ending.<br />Great job, Asuqi!EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-52333995705882889662011-02-18T11:30:38.477+00:002011-02-18T11:30:38.477+00:00A heartbreaking tale that did not need to describe...A heartbreaking tale that did not need to describe the abuse for the reader to feel her pain. Brilliant.Ellie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-28990516519529835792011-02-18T11:20:35.324+00:002011-02-18T11:20:35.324+00:00Asuqi, delicate yet strong, heart rending and ench...Asuqi, delicate yet strong, heart rending and enchanting at the same time. The maze, oh yes ...Antonia Woodvillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12594229396805493611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-50099588209087519782011-02-18T10:58:06.100+00:002011-02-18T10:58:06.100+00:00I really liked this. It made me think of Beauty a...I really liked this. It made me think of Beauty and the Beast, and how we all have a bit of both inside us. One of my favourites so far.Lou Treleavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10762053108717257093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-81790641983146663622011-02-18T08:56:11.126+00:002011-02-18T08:56:11.126+00:00A dark and heartbreaking tale that had me from sta...A dark and heartbreaking tale that had me from start to finish. A very well written story. Great job!David Barberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05006533626998905560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-69598517036184523972011-02-18T01:22:59.569+00:002011-02-18T01:22:59.569+00:00That was utterly enthralling, and I'm horrifie...That was utterly enthralling, and I'm horrified at what is left unsaid. You have great command of these words asuqi. So well done.Chris Alliniottehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04094925215735680849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7536979460489400599.post-14436277977004316452011-02-18T00:07:37.562+00:002011-02-18T00:07:37.562+00:00*bows*
Madam Asuqi, I shall see you at the other ...*bows*<br /><br />Madam Asuqi, I shall see you at the other end of the maze. You know the one.R.S. Bohnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09101260459422806220noreply@blogger.com